I am a student at goldfields primary this is a place were i will be able to share my learning with you. please note....some work won't be edited just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. i would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wow - what an imagination you have. This is a cool explanation of your monkey and her special powers etc. Next time remember to use correct punctuation for your reader to make more sense of the ideas.
ReplyDeleteHi Lily, it was great to read your story today! I got a surprise when I read the ending! I think you did a great job with your space monkey drawing. You used the drawing tool a lot better than I did : )
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